I have never written anything in one draft, not even a grocery list, although I have heard from friends that this is actually possible.—Connie Willis
You guys. Guess what? I finished the first draft of my second novel last week. Wait, what? A second novel?
I know, right?
On January 13, I began sketching out characters. On April 2, I typed THE END at, well, the end of a 105,368 word manuscript.
How did that happen? How did this writer go from taking eighteen months to bash her way through a first manuscript—one that split its seams at 167,000 words before it came to a stop at 99,000—to a ten-week blitz of a pretty clean first draft?
Crikey! Can I do it again?
Well, let’s not worry about that now.
Let’s think about what went right.
I had no idea what this story would be about when I sat down in January with a blank notebook and a blue Pilot fine point. I knew the setting: southwest Ireland. That was it. Once I had the characters and their internal conflicts roughed out, the external conflicts and themes gradually took shape. I cobbled together a very general outline that provided guideposts along the way. It’s an outline I’ll redraft in far greater detail when I begin Draft Two.
Conversely, with Refuge of Doves, I had a story idea—an image in my mind of a woman standing before the ruins of a Cathar citadel in Languedoc, France—and a “what-if?” of history, around which I built the plot. But I had no idea where it would take me. I didn’t know my characters all that well. In a couple of cases, I still don’t. And it shows.
Really, I had no idea what I was doing the first time out. I just needed to start writing. I knew if I got bogged down in research or plotting, I’d never start the story. I had to develop the habit of writing every day and trust that the rest would sort itself out in time. And so I did. And so the story did, too. Over the course of months, a narrative began to take shape and I fell in love not just with the process, but with my people.
But I did not write sequential scenes. Primarily because I had a beginning and a vague idea of the end, but not much notion of what would happen in between. I just wrote a bunch of stuff.
So, a year after typing the opening words to Refuge, I had to lay out the scenes—and I mean literally: the living room floor was a giant grid of 8 1/2 ” x 11″ pages, with my prone body on top, sobbing—and try to put them in some sort of order. I spent the next five months cleaning it up and straightening it out, simply to get to The End. Of a first-ish draft.
What happened last week (let’s give it a name, shall we? Working Title: The Crows of Beara) was the product of a writer determined not to repeat the past. I set a weekly goal of 10,000 words and butt stayed in chair until that happened. I wrote scenes in order. I shut down the inner editor (repeatedly, daily, hourly, by the minute) and just wrote.
I’d planned to reserve one day a week for editing, but I abandoned that notion early on. Editing mired me down in minutiae and side-tracked me from simply letting the story pour forth. I jotted notes where I knew I needed more character development or technical research or where theme threads dropped or things got backstory heavy, but I left the writing alone.
I wrote fast. I wrote furious. It was a joyful experience. So much so that it’s all I want to do. I just want to write first drafts, you know? First Drafts Are Art, Baby. Unfettered by the rules of craft, playing loose with grammar, throwing ideas and not bothering to see what sticks and what drops to the floor like limp spaghetti.
Alas. The First Draft Fantasy. First drafts are like those early, googly-eyed days of a relationship. No matter how besotted you are by the First Draft, at some point there will be morning breath and the electric bill and someone’s red shirt in the washer with your white socks. At some point, there will be a revisions. Many. Revisions.
Refuge of Doves, which I finished in December, sits on my desk—set aside, but not forgotten. I’d been dreading the inevitable rewrite(s), but as I think about what went right this second time out of the gate, I know I can sort it.
One of the greatest unintended consequences of burning through the first draft of The Crows of Beara has been the building of eagerness to apply what I’ve learned about myself as a writer—and the shoring up of my weaknesses—on the massive project that awaits me.
And more than ever, I realize that the eighteen months I spent writing Refuge of Doves were eighteen months spent learning how to write a First Draft. Now I’m ready to turn it into a novel.
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